skip this!
My best advice for you is to give it more voice action! The man with the voice box is creepy and just boring, barely entertaining action at best! I personally like the ship! It was cool moving through the rocks I would have him fly the ship behind a rock and shrink and grow the object to give it more of a 3D look to it not just flat! and I would have the camera angle at a 35 or 45 degree angle so that the ship flew in that angle it makes the animation more dramatic and exciting! also you can run your Frames Per-Minute at 24 FPS to have quicker smoother movements. other then that ,good idea with the story!
Keep this stuff in min while animating!
keep up the good work man! :)