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My best advice for you is to give it more voice action! The man with the voice box is creepy and just boring, barely entertaining action at best! I personally like the ship! It was cool moving through the rocks I would have him fly the ship behind a rock and shrink and grow the object to give it more of a 3D look to it not just flat! and I would have the camera angle at a 35 or 45 degree angle so that the ship flew in that angle it makes the animation more dramatic and exciting! also you can run your Frames Per-Minute at 24 FPS to have quicker smoother movements. other then that ,good idea with the story!

Keep this stuff in min while animating!

keep up the good work man! :)

Jaiba responds:

good advice i will take it from someone who is respectful. thank you

tips!

The last guy said "up your FPS" just so your not confused thats does not mean first person shooter. (my favorite type of game) That means frames per second! normally you should set it at 24 FPS, not the default 12 FPS every rookie makes that mistake at first! keep up the good work

GameBros-Studios responds:

thing is, i know its frames per second... i set my FPS to 30 so that it would be as smooth as possible.... but it sorta bugged up when i submited it... i have no clue why. thanks for the review :)

nice

keep up the good sneeze

sunTyro responds:

i will.

NIOCE

thats right! thats how we say it in cali! VARY NOICE! keep up the wicked work

interesting concept

haha

la -- smash--- nice keep it up

ah yeah man

thats was entertaining nice sync. keep up the good work

damn

that was deep sorta keep up the good work

yum

had trouble making out some of the words but it was cool keep it up

mmmmm coffee

every morning I brew some bomb coffee and smoke a fat bong rip and then I log on to newgrounds.com mmmmmm! thats nice! keep up the good work

tra la la

hahah oh my butt sex! hahaha good one man keep it up

SaltyPeach responds:

why is you give me 5. No pun intended.

I don't know shit about flash animation, but I have been playing with it for years, I have a few animations on here that do ok for now. I been putting every thing I know about animation comedy and art into a whole series of new shows..

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